Friday, March 7, 2008

En a smile escapes my lips !!!

This is a poem I did written some 9 months ago, One of my first poems. After reading Cinderella's 'Time has frozen' I somehow felt like re-posting this lil poem. In this post she has so beautifully written her love which grew over the years. I will perhaps read it a twenty times in the coming week. She has written each ‘true’ moment of love. I write only fiction. Lovely things that never happened and those in any probability arent gonna happen. I felt I was missing out on a lot of life !!!

I was a mad lil lad
Dark black eyes i had
She was a sweet lil girl
Soft silky hair with a curl
Thinkin of 'er a lil tear drips
En a smile escapes my lips.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Those days i long for
Of solitude me n her
Those lasting weekends spent together
Laughed n cried , memories forever
Imagining em my heart rips
En a smile escapes my lips

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Those catch me's in the rain
Those who's first in the plain
Lunch we shared on the stairs
Cool sundae we bought in pairs
Those secret river valley trips
En a smile escapes my lips.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

That one day i still remember
When she cried on my shoulder
Like ganges tears flowed
My sympathy she allowed
But now my heart weeps
En a smile escapes my lips

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

She called me her best fren
Her pure heart she'd always lend
I was in love unknown
O'er the years it has grown
My soul curls, closes n crips
En a smile escapes my lips

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Heart knew it all
Let the feelings fall
Shez goin away far
Leavin back a scar
Thinkin of 'er a lil tear drips
En a smile escapes my lips

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

For One thing i wished
The entire world be vanished
Jus the two of us alive
On mother earth we thrive
Alas!!!!! her essence grips
En a smile escapes my lips

21 comments:

Knatchbulley Hughzscene said...

oyee first commentt..
sweet poem yaar.. but thoda confusin.. u r happy ya sad??
confounded.. ya i've nt undrstood it..

p.s. my post 'crushed by exam' is real story of mine :P

Vandita said...

thats soo sweet zahid, but it kinda made me smile in a sad sorta way!
simple and adorable nonetheless

divya said...

sweetzie, is everything here fiction :O i wish that crying on the shoulder was true :P

lovely poem just like you :)

Cinderella. said...

Goodness heavens, this was so beautiful !!
Almost divine, almost heavenly !!
I can feel every word you said there, and now its my turn to say, each and every single verse must be scored 10 on 10. Not an ounce less.
Adorable..gorgeous..endearing..and full of your impish charm !!
You're such a sweetheart !!

And about what you said in your post as well as mine,

**I write only fiction. Lovely things that never happened and those in any probability arent gonna happen. I felt I was missing out on a lot of life !!!**

Dont feel you're missing out on something.
Instead feel, you're building up, steps and mezannines of sweet little nothings, to behold and reimburse when your time comes...for come one dawn it shall.

Thankyou so so much for the lovely lovely words of kindness and appreciation.

You made my day sweets...!!!!!

*~*Sameera*~* said...

Bhai that was wonderful!Tum kitne ache shayar ho :)

You have a lot to look forward to dear,tumhara bhi number aaega,just wait!TC.Have a nice weekend.

And I agree with you,her poem is awesome!

AVINASH said...

heeiii..... i think this is poetic version of ur matrimonial AD .... neway i accept tat its a gud one b'coz i think writing a poem itself is a difficult task according to me.. and tat too this simple and gudd.....

the basu said...

hey buddy very cute poetry.a little juvenile maybe,but it sure portrays the storm within.n if this' your story,it's time you act and realize your dream yaar!!

♥bμşγ-ŵŗϊŧēŕ♥ said...

Ahem. Sadness. :| Bad ending. Sigh. Sweet though. It had the, feel. :)

P.S-will read that cinderella's post now!

zahid said...

@Knatchbulley

Tu toh hai confusion confounded !!!

zahid said...

@vandita

Yeah...Smile sadly !!! I love doing that

zahid said...

@lucky di

Soo do I but Alas !!!

zahid said...

@cinderella

Its actually you who made up my day !!! Sweeti You are !!!

zahid said...

@sameera

Hers is absolutely awesome....Haan every dog has a day so mera bhi number aayega

zahid said...

@avinash

Thanks so much for the shower dude...(of praises)

zahid said...

@basu

Yes dear...I just hope I achieve what i realise

zahid said...

@Busy writer

Thnq Thnq busy writer !! Aloha !!!

The Mad Girl said...

how shweet!!!

zahid said...

@mad girl

I thought !!!

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