Wednesday, October 10, 2007

The angelic devil !!!

I knew this creature, one year less than I knew myself…..She is the single most creature who shares the same set of blood as I. And when this creature returned from her music classes smiling all by herself and yet at the same time trying to hide it, I knew she would invade my time after dinner.

“Hey gruff….Things are happening pretty fast”.

She was a whiz at coining out new nick-names every other day. Not only did she dole out these words but she had her own sense of logic behind them. I have passed through chum, crank, prank, Socrates, flush, qwerty, magpie and many more…. and now it was Gruff!!!

“How fast? ”
“I don’t know….Just felt like saying….”
“Abt Music?”
“Music is love”
“I cant get u….be to the point dear!!!”

I was in no mood for telepathy but I cudn’t usher her away. Something told me that she needed me.

“Gruff!! I cant understand why or rather how”

So, she couldn’t tell me that in the eyes. So I took a newspaper and began to read it, waiting for more of her. Both of us knew that.

“Gruff! I guess I am in love.”

Any question of who, what or where he is would have made her reluctant to talk more. She came to me out of all others bcoz she knew I wouldn’t inquire but listen, and listen more than speak.


Slowly I lowered the news paper and started staring at her while she poured out her story. I had to be really careful that the stare wasn’t derisive. At the end, I was in a fix. Well, What did she expect of me now? Answering this was quite a challenge.

I dint know what to do……Alright!!! I managed to say I would love to meet him. And she got a smile on her face for this.

There was a sudden sense of closeness in those moments. And the sweet devil took benefit of this moment to delve into me. Slowly I found myself reciting my only love, I had successfully hidden from everybody all these years, to her and she was staring at me with the same élan. Something inside me told that it was a pretence but I was already in the trap.


Hours passed. It was two in the night. No notion to sleep. We sat down giggling.

Suddenly she says “Gruff!! I wasn’t in any kind of love. I dint know any such boy. And i even dint....”
“But you….”
“I made it all up…”
***she is hit with a pillow I threw upon her* **
“Just you wait, I will….”
***No use yelling, she is already down rolling and laughing* **


It would be silly if I claim not knowing any girl either. The worst part was that she knew enough about me now to blackmail me for a treat every other weekend at every other coffee corner. And her treats were damn expensive!!!!

I must have known this before. Can’t do anything now….Just that I will wait till the day she really finds someone and then be a merciless devil myself. But yeah!! She is my only sister. And such a sweet one too….. I must admit, It was a pleasure falling into her trap….. Just hope she isn’t too hard on my pocket - - - - The Angelic devil !!!


P.S : I don’t have a sister, But how I wish I had one !!! To fight, tease and share myself with !!!!

- - - - - - - > Z a H ! D

21 comments:

matty said...

damn good!
put very realistically...
well i don't even have a sister...
but just like you i have also longed for one always!
keep writing...

zahid said...

Isnt it great to have a sweet sister???

Hope we get one if anyhting called 'nxt life' exists!!!

garima said...

oh boy i wonder if u can write sooooooo well widout havin a sister , wat wud u have done if u had one.......well u know i olways longed for an elder brother like d 1 you have depicted in dis post but i got a younger one who s very coy n jus doesn't open up (u noe jus not my kinds) n now dat he s away in a boarding school ur article brought back all our memories of how i wud bug him wid my stories all nyt n try n coax words out of his mouth wen he wud come for his vacations........dis article in my opinion is a brilliant piece of emotion.................by the way thanks for ur comment on my blog n ya d songs called 'skater boy'!


PS:i wud love to have an oppurtunity to get my hand writing analysed!!!!!!!

Patchez said...

Well written man!

The rest that i want to say has already been echoed by others... :) see you, and Eid Mubaraq!

zahid said...

@garima

seems ur brother isnt just the fight-mock tease kind...

however hez lucky enough...he got u

zahid said...

@ patchez!!

Thnx for the eid wishes and same to u...

Patchez said...

all right... i cant take that any more.. lolz.. :P dun think Ive done any justice to this post.. was really touching.. there were times i'd wish i had a younger sister too.. anyways, way too distant past.. :) ciao!

garima said...

i don think so.........he s olways cribbin abt not havin n elder bro instead of a sis.......

sneha said...

zahid.....everytime i decide that this is the best post you've written and everytime your next post proves me wrong....great man!!!!

cheers
sneha

zahid said...

@garima

tell him he is a lot better off with a sis and would be further in trouble with an elder bro...

garima said...

@zahid

lol.............as if he cares wat i tel him!

zahid said...

@sneha

Yep...Cheers!!!

Arwindh said...

good one dude..

The Mad Girl said...

I completely love this post!too good!

abhi said...

Very Cute!!
Sighn those were the days of innocense..

manisha said...

hve an elder brother...but bt i always wished i hd a sis...guess evry sibling hs this view...bt m grateful for my bro...tho v dnt fight n all...nd yeah...i call my lii'leee cousin bro- mishievous sprite...he he..nd u angelic devil...wow...y search 4 a nxt lyf!!!m younger thwn u :P by 1 year i supose...bt i guess it odesnt make me smalll enuf for u :(

sana said...

wow! damn gud.
if u had a sis,she wud be very lucky!
cheers.

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